love's in... jeopardy! | a haiku

love's in... jeopardy! | a haiku

Postby ocean_waves » Thu Jan 17, 2013 3:50 am

a burnt out candle,
a bird plucked of its feathers.
what is loneliness?
"True seeing is called transcendence;
False seeing is worldliness:
Set aside both right and wrong,
And the nature of enlightenment is clear."
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Re: love's in... jeopardy! | a haiku

Postby greentara » Wed Jan 23, 2013 2:30 pm

ocean waves, quite lovely!
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Re: love's in... jeopardy! | a haiku

Postby ocean_waves » Sun Jan 27, 2013 6:33 pm

greentara wrote:ocean waves, quite lovely!

Thank you greentara! I appreciate those words coming from another poet!!! :thanks:
"True seeing is called transcendence;
False seeing is worldliness:
Set aside both right and wrong,
And the nature of enlightenment is clear."
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