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Jesse
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Ashes

Postby Jesse » Fri Nov 23, 2012 9:28 pm

Life is absurd

Most of it beyond belief, and it's really just a figment
a solidified dream, one that leaves me feeling empty
because I can dream so much more, and all those dreams
don't mean a thing, and my journey has grown tired
and stale, and It will never shine again, because
at every turn I'm reminded of how foolish I am
there is no magic anymore, my world has grown hollow
and every belief, is like a song that ends too soon
if you take a hammer, and smash the world to pieces
it's beautiful, but as the ashes of the world settle
and solidify, you never know how your mind will end up
I like the world in ashes, thrown into the air
because that's the only place where everything is beautiful
“Freedom is secured not by the fulfilling of one's desires, but by the removal of desire” – Epictetus

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Re: Ashes

Postby lobster » Fri Nov 23, 2012 11:51 pm

You are lucky to have any sort of mind.

Great piece. Many thanks :thumbsup:


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