Magic Carpet Ride

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Kunga Lhadzom
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Magic Carpet Ride

Post by Kunga Lhadzom » Mon Mar 05, 2018 12:06 am

ha ha ha

he made me laugh so hard

gave me easy things
to do

but the easy became
difficult
and the laughter
pain

now i sit here
free from
his laughter
and ramblings

drunk on
the junk
of my wild
horse
mind

pondering
memories
of my guru

magic carpet ride is over
rug
pulled
The Universe flowing through my veins...stars falling from my eyes......rocks rolling in my head...lemon juice dripping down my chin....

https://drunklotus.blog

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Minobu
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Re: Magic Carpet Ride

Post by Minobu » Mon Mar 05, 2018 2:16 am

I really enjoyed this...
there are a few lines that i adore:
drunk on
the junk
of my wild
horse
mind
that speaks volumes for a Buddhist...


and come on now...this is word smith golden :
magic carpet ride is over
rug
pulled
love it...

thanks for the moment.

Kunga Lhadzom wrote:
Mon Mar 05, 2018 12:06 am
ha ha ha

he made me laugh so hard

gave me easy things
to do

but the easy became
difficult
and the laughter
pain

now i sit here
free from
his laughter
and ramblings

drunk on
the junk
of my wild
horse
mind

pondering
memories
of my guru

magic carpet ride is over
rug
pulled

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Kunga Lhadzom
Posts: 1469
Joined: Sat Jan 30, 2010 2:01 am

Re: Magic Carpet Ride

Post by Kunga Lhadzom » Tue Mar 06, 2018 8:02 pm

Minobu wrote:
Mon Mar 05, 2018 2:16 am
I really enjoyed this...
Thank you Minobu... :heart:
The Universe flowing through my veins...stars falling from my eyes......rocks rolling in my head...lemon juice dripping down my chin....

https://drunklotus.blog

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