Thoughts from in between the sets.

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Thoughts from in between the sets.

Post by ElSexyBuda » Fri Oct 14, 2011 7:45 pm

I died
on that day
next to her
as she lay dying

the gift of life
slipping away
from more than one

I left me
by the bedside

deathbed for two

from one
to the next



in the cycle

only one remains
but not the same

beside the berth
sorrowfully slumped

the dead
next to the dying

there is life
slipping away
from only one

the unmending

sitting with life
repose for death


a twofold parting

is the living dead

after all
the death

I had life
I wasn't alive
Watching your life, is like watching a hummingbird, you will inevitably blink and miss what is happening.

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Re: Thoughts from in between the sets.

Post by Ogyen » Sat Oct 15, 2011 6:12 pm

this is really deep. Thank you for sharing.

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"To love. To be loved. To never forget your own insignificance. To never get used to the unspeakable violence and the vulgar disparity of life around you. To seek joy in the saddest places. To pursue beauty to its lair. To never simplify what is complicated or complicate what is simple. To respect strength, never power. Above all, to watch. To try and understand. To never look away. And never, never, to forget." –Arundhati Roy

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